Talk:Kaine (manga)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 12:29, 12 August 2019 (UTC)

Comments That's all, nothing fundamental and an enjoyable read. I'll put it on hold while we address the trivialities above. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 10:22, 14 August 2019 (UTC)
 * "Kaine die kuro to live shiro no nōnaimayaku busshitsu" presumably this translates into more than just Kaine...?
 * " Hakusensha late" for us non-experts, possibly add "publishing company" in front of Hakusensha?
 * "Anime and Manga portal" -> "Anime and Manga portal"
 * " but a high induced " maybe link "high" here.
 * Not convinced we need a link to Los Angeles.
 * "Its sequel short story" we've lost what "Its" is by now...
 * "manga artist Kaori Yuki " WP:SEAOFBLUE.
 * "rock music.[9][1][10] " refs in numerical order.
 * " remarked upon.[10][11][9]" and "a manga artist.[10][11][9]" same.
 * Ref 10, spaced hyphen should be spaced en-dash.


 * Thank you for taking the time to review! :) I'm quite happy to hear that you found it an enjoyable read. I certainly recommend the source material if you're into thriller manga. I believe I have addressed your concerns with the exception of the portal, because I'm not exactly sure what's going on with the portals right now in a technical sense. I believe it has something to do with the infobox template, but templates are a bit beyond me, I'm afraid! Best wishes, Rapunzel-bellflower (talk) 02:17, 15 August 2019 (UTC)
 * Good work, I fixed a dab, but now passing. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 13:28, 15 August 2019 (UTC)
 * Thank you!! :) Rapunzel-bellflower (talk) 23:43, 15 August 2019 (UTC)