Talk:Kaisha Atakhanova

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peer editing feedback
1.	Formatting the citations: the superscript should be after the period. 2.	Change wording intro: from “Due to her civil society activism, she was awarded the international…” to something like “She was awarded the ….. for her civil society activism..” 3.	Early life section: transition between the two sections is somewhat weird. Change wording for the sentence “the effects of radiation…” as to make it clearer. 4.	The language in the Career and Research section: Because the dominant view in science still seems to praise dispassionate researchers, I would suggest editing this section to state her work as fact-of-the-matter. (deleting “she decided to..” “following her interest.”) 5.	I’d say change the sentence “In 1992, she abandoned her research to found…” just state: “In 1992, she founded the Karaganda… “ — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sayetti (talk • contribs) 17:29, 14 February 2019 (UTC)