Talk:Kaivalya Upanishad/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 05:23, 3 February 2016 (UTC)

Will review. Sainsf &lt;^&gt; Talk all words 05:23, 3 February 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review. I have collaborated with User:Ms Sarah Welch who will also respond. Nvvchar . 13:43, 3 February 2016 (UTC)

Lead

 * Why is the name in italics while heading is not? It is not uniform in the text either.
 * Fixed. Both are italics.


 * Do not use citations in the lead. Use them only in main text.
 * Indeed. I moved some text and all sources from the lead into the main article. I had to move some text so that nothing in the lead appears unsourced/unsupported in the main article.


 * Upanishads linked twice.
 * Fixed.

Etymology

 * Who is Deussen?
 * Added, wikified and source there verified

Chronology

 * Link Shiva and Hinduism as they are first mentioned.
 * Done by @Nvvchar

Structure

 * What is a poetic meter?
 * It should have been Vedic meter, wikified and added explanation


 * Duplinks: Mundaka Upanishad and Shvetashvatara Upanishad
 *  thus referencing them, yet building  Comma should be replaced with "And".
 * Done by @Nvvchar

Content

 * Only one duplink : Brahma.
 * Done by @Nvvchar


 * translate Deussen and other scholars other scholars is vague, how about et. al.?
 * Fixed


 * You forget to mention "states the text" in places ,it is almost as if you are saying all this. Introduce that phrase regularly.
 * Done by @Nvvchar

Commentaries

 * Sarvepalli Radhakrishnan translated it in his 1953 book The Principal Upanishads. No source for this?
 * Added


 * published first in 1971 "first published".
 * Done by @Nvvchar


 * Thanks for the review. Your detailed review and points were helpful. Please double check my edits and if I missed anything or duplinks, please fix. Also, both @Redtigerxyz and you started this article a year ago, an initiative that is commendable. Ms Sarah Welch (talk) 00:44, 4 February 2016 (UTC)
 * The text has been slightly modified by Ms Sarah Welch due to shifting of references from the lead. All review issues have been addressed by her thoroughly. Pl see. Nvvchar . 01:20, 4 February 2016 (UTC)
 * Promoted. Congrats! Sainsf  &lt;^&gt; Talk all words 05:46, 6 February 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much,. Nvvchar . 05:56, 7 February 2016 (UTC)