Talk:Kalamazoo-class monitor/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hahc21 (talk · contribs) 17:03, 5 January 2013 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * All fine here


 * Contruction
 * "Construction began on the ships" Isn't better two turn it around and say "construction of the ships began"?
 * "in late 1863 and early 1864" --> "'between late 1863 and early 1864" would be better?
 * "they were still building" this "they" refers to the ship or to the shipyards? if it refers to the ships, the "been built" will fit better.
 * "to new several new ship naming" is it necessary to say "new" twice?


 * Final comments
 * Okay. That's all. Overall, I find the article good. Awaiting response. — ΛΧΣ  21  17:16, 5 January 2013 (UTC)
 * I think that I've addressed all of your points. Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:50, 5 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Good. Great article. Passed. — ΛΧΣ  21  19:27, 5 January 2013 (UTC)