Talk:Kampung Boy (TV series)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: &bull; Ling.Nut 13:04, 9 October 2010 (UTC)


 * There are three cites in the "Academic sources" section (Muliyadi Mahamood, etc.) that deviate from the family name- comma - first name format of other cites. Is this deliberate? If so, then perhaps you should put an HTML comment in front of each of them to explain the situation, lest others come later and "fix" them... &bull; Ling.Nut
 * Yes, this is in line with academic journals who use the full name (without last, first format) for Malay names. Although I do not see this to be a problem, I see no issue with inserting comments.  Is this satisfactory?  Jappalang (talk) 04:32, 10 October 2010 (UTC)
 * OK! Thanks. :-)
 * I made several changes to the text while copy editing. Please do look them over carefully. Though I think the changes do not alter the meaning or add new information in an undue manner, it's possible that I'm wrong in some cases. If so, just go ahead and change those bits back to the way you think they should be.&bull; Ling.Nut 05:47, 10 October 2010 (UTC)
 * I think they look fine. Thank you.  Jappalang (talk) 10:18, 10 October 2010 (UTC)
 * Dude, you rock. PASS GA &bull; Ling.Nut 10:41, 10 October 2010 (UTC)