Talk:Kaname Harada/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk · contribs) 14:49, 31 December 2016 (UTC)

Will come back shortly. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 14:49, 31 December 2016 (UTC)


 * Section 1.1;
 * A comma after "After completing school"
 * the Imperial Japanese Navy's marine force; the navy itself is a marine force. Please reword to avoid confusion.
 * The term was referring to Marines, but the IJN didn't really have them - it had naval infantry, so I've tweaked this. Nick-D (talk) 22:22, 14 January 2017 (UTC)
 * during the first months of the war -> during the initial months of the war
 * Done Nick-D (talk) 22:22, 14 January 2017 (UTC)
 * Infobox;
 * Mention date of his death.
 * It's there at present. Nick-D (talk) 22:22, 14 January 2017 (UTC)
 * Section 2; all good.
 * 15.3% violation
 * No dab links found.
 * External links check shows one dead link, fix it.
 * All images are appropriately licensed.
 * Excellent job Nick. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 14:08, 3 January 2017 (UTC)
 * Sorry for my slow response; somehow I missed that you'd posted the review. I think that I've now addressed your comments. Nick-D (talk) 22:22, 14 January 2017 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 03:03, 15 January 2017 (UTC)
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 03:03, 15 January 2017 (UTC)
 * Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 03:03, 15 January 2017 (UTC)