Talk:Kaneez Paracha/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 02:55, 10 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments

 * "with husband" "with her husband"
 * Add hyphens between both uses of "working class".
 * "learnt" "learned"
 * Remove the comma after "a date with him".
 * "in order to" "to" (less wordy)
 * "the series itself for their" "the series itself for its"
 * "which she made her feel" "which made her feel"
 * "into the scipt" "into the script"
 * "a positive of opinion" – reword
 * References are archived.
 * Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 02:55, 10 August 2021 (UTC)


 * ✅ all. Sorry it took me so long! – DarkGlow • 00:18, 13 August 2021 (UTC)
 * No worries. Passing the article. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 00:35, 13 August 2021 (UTC)