Talk:Kardinya, Western Australia/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Vacant0 (talk · contribs) 13:13, 2 January 2022 (UTC)

Hi! I saw this article on the GAN backlog. I will start the review asap. Cheers, --Vacant0 (talk) 13:13, 2 January 2022 (UTC)

General

 * Although optional, I would prefer the addition of a on top of the article.
 * Link the "European settlement" in the lede and "Before European colonisation" section with the History of Australia (1788–1850) article.
 * Rest of the lede is alright and it is well-written. It satisfies the manual of style.
 * Move the "History" section above the "Geography and natural history" section which can be renamed to "Geography and nature".
 * Link dunes in the Geography section. The rest of the section is good.
 * "They lived on the area south" → isn't this supposed to be "in the area"?
 * Law and order can be linked in the "European colonisation" section.
 * Would prefer "The suburb was home to 8,730 people at the Australian Bureau of Statistics's 2016 census" → The suburb was home to 8,730 people according to the Australian Bureau of Statistics's 2016 census.
 * "It sold groceries and had a petrol pump. That was demolished in the 1970s." – these two sentences should be merged.
 * "Kardinya in the City of Melville local government area." → Kardinya is located in the City of Melville local government area.
 * Link "centre-left" with centre-left politics and "centre-right" with centre-right politics.
 * Labor Party and Liberal Party should be capitalized.

Images

 * Thanks for taking the pictures, they look great. Alt texts are also included, great!