Talk:Karen Arthur

Cleanup
Thank you for your efforts on this article. For more information on cleanup required, try checking the Wikipedia Manual of Style. Looking at the format of other bios (for example, follow the category links at the bottom of the page) may also be useful. And if you have any questions, feel free to ask! --Elonka 17:25, 29 August 2006 (UTC)
 * The article's definitely looking better. However, it still needs to be more clear about where it's getting its information.  For example, about the "long take."  That part is definitely interesting and encyclopedic, but what's the source?  Ideally, information like that should be linked to an outside source such as a book or newspaper/magazine article which credits her for that type of accomplishment.  Check the Wikipedia policy at WP:V for more information on citing sources. --Elonka 06:40, 30 August 2006 (UTC)