Talk:Karen Foss (feminist scholar)

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Peer Review By Addie Long 1. It does have all of the parts with awesome formatting. 2. The introduction is very strong, I would just say maybe address her as "Dr. Karen Foss" for at least the first time her name is mentioned. I would also say just a general statement about what her contributions are to (sentence currently: "In addition, Foss has received 11 honors for her numerous contributions and publications"). 3. The only small structural change would be to the sentence "The alternative, or constructed paradigm refers to change" by adding a comma after constructed to read "The alternative, or constructed, paradigm." I would also suggest that in the sentence that reads "Foss’s article suggests the transition of the conventional paradigm to the alternative paradigm to potentially expand our traditional methods to generate change" I would add what change would be generated specifically. 4. Good overall impression, the formatting of the article makes it look very professional and the content is intriguing while still remaining easy to understand as a reader.

Abigail Gilbert Peer Review

1. All parts are included. Formatting looks great & outline at the beginning makes overall article look organized and easy to follow. 2. Opening sentence has a lot of ideas attached to it. I wonder if this sentence was split up a bit? 3. I would suggest a comma after "with this observation,". I would also suggest referring to her as "Dr. Foss throughout the entire article. 4. Overall, this looks really great! The formatting is wonderful and effective. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Abigail.gilbert (talk • contribs) 04:28, 7 April 2017 (UTC)

2 good reviews of this article! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Aburnett412 (talk • contribs) 23:39, 25 April 2017 (UTC)

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