Talk:Karen Zoid

Promotional?
The article reads as promotional/commercial material. Rather sensationalist wording, lack of references, and gossip-mongering stylisation devalue the article's usefulness. I've tried to fix some of it but don't want to step too heavily on toes. In my opinion it needs further revision (eg, removal of she sang with so-and-so at so-and-so) and additional citations (eg, there is no citation for her busking in Jo'burg).

Rechtstaat (talk) 01:58, 12 February 2010 (UTC)