Talk:Karey Dornetto

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I fixed some punctuation errors and added a few internal links to your article. I would suggest some rephrasing of some of your sentences, specifically the section about her personal life because It sounds odd to switch from her parents to her sexual orientation and back to the fact that she has a sister. You should include her birthday if you are able to find it. Your award box is good, although I'm unsure of how viable your sources are (eg. IMDB). I also think that if you are able to find out what publications she has written for that you should include them.

Kdiddyy (talk) 13:26, 17 March 2016 (UTC)