Talk:Karl Aloys zu Fürstenberg/GA1

GA Review
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GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Reviewer: MisterBee1966 (talk) 07:59, 20 January 2010 (UTC)
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 * Question did he receive an military decorations? MisterBee1966 (talk) 10:28, 20 January 2010 (UTC)
 * When comparing the German article to this article I find a number of omissions. Example: according to the German article he fought Laurent de Gouvion Saint-Cyr at the Battle near Schliengen on 24 October 1796. I can only assume that this may be covered in the article Battle of Emmendingen. A further delta is that he was the name patron of Infanterie-Regiment Nr. 36. Just to name a few. I think that the entire section of the First Coalition could be expanded a bit more. Again this is motivated after reading the German Wiki article which details this period a lot more.MisterBee1966 (talk) 10:42, 20 January 2010 (UTC)
 * At the end of section 1, he is noted as Colonel and Proprietor of 34th Infantry regiment.
 * I'll add Schliengen. There is a lot in the German article that I didn't use because I couldn't find a source on it.  Auntieruth55 (talk) 20:32, 20 January 2010 (UTC)


 * Another question regarding his children, what references refer to his children? There is no citation. MisterBee1966 (talk) 10:48, 20 January 2010 (UTC)
 * that reference was there at one point, and I'll find it again. Auntieruth55 (talk) 20:32, 20 January 2010 (UTC)


 * Support I found two minor grammatical errors and one spelling error and took the liberty to fix them myself. Otherwise I think this is a very nice article. I do want to point out that I do not feel adapt enough to challenge your writing skills. So another reviewer may find something to object. MisterBee1966 (talk) 10:52, 21 January 2010 (UTC)


 * One final post review request: could you please add the Persondata template to the bottom of the article. MisterBee1966 (talk) 11:11, 21 January 2010 (UTC)