Talk:Karma (Anxhela Peristeri song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:22, 11 June 2022 (UTC)

This is a large GAN from you; I will get on with it today! --K. Peake 07:22, 11 June 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * WP:OVERLINK of Anxhela Peristeri in the Eurovision Song Contest part of the infobox
 * The semi-final points are not sourced anywhere in the body
 * The composed and written/production sentence should be the second of the lead instead
 * Remove the mid-tempo part because that is not notable for the lead
 * Remove the field of 26 part from the lead since it is not notable here
 * "gave positive reviews of" → "gave widely positive reviews of"
 * "its nature, Peristeri's vocal delivery, and" → "the nature, Peristeri's vocal delivery and"
 * Wikilink Eurovision Song Contest
 * Wikilink Kosovo

Background and composition

 * "Upon winning the" → "Upon her winning the"
 * "have previously been involved" → "had previously been involved"
 * Mention in the composition the instrumentation like strings that the re-vamp added per sourcing
 * The lyrics need to be ended with a full-stop

Reception

 * "received widespread acclaim from" → "was met with widespread acclaim from"
 * "Aussievision characterised the song" → "The staff of Aussievision characterised the song"
 * "also gave a positive review of the song," → "also positively reviewed the song,"
 * "stage presence, and the song's lyrics." → "stage presence and the lyrics."
 * "and more in-your-face"." → "and more in-your-face."" per MOS:QUOTE on full sentences
 * "and "stronger contender" for a" → "and a "stronger contender" for a"

Promotion and music video

 * Remove the comma after Ora News
 * Remove pipe on Wiwi Jam
 * [28][29][30] shouldn't these be ordered in the same order as the performances?
 * The preview source seems to be for one of the revamped version rather than the music video; if so, shouldn't this be in background instead?

Before Rotterdam

 * Remove pipe on 59th edition
 * Remove wikilink on Festivali i Këngës
 * Remove wikilink on Eurovision Song Contest 2021
 * Pipe COVID-19 to COVID-19 pandemic

In Rotterdam

 * "on 18 and 20 May 2021, respectively, and" → "on 18 and 20 May and"
 * "was drawn to perform" → "was set to perform"
 * "was the first nation of the 10 to be" → "was one of the 10 nations to be"
 * "at 2nd position," → "at second position," per MOS:NUM
 * The second semi-final points should be mentioned here, as they are listed in the infobox and lead
 * Added that part, you're fine with that? Iaof2017 (talk) 10:25, 12 June 2022 (UTC)


 * The glittery and crystal parts are not sourced
 * The black LED backdrop is not sourced
 * Where is the hand movements for light sourced?
 * The grey colour is not sourced
 * "with generally positive reviews from critics and viewers." → "with generally positive reviews from critics." per no viewer info being mentioned
 * "concluded that it" → "concluded that the performance"

Credits and personnel

 * Wikilink Dimitris Kontopoulos

Track listing

 * Good

Release history

 * Good

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 10:24, 11 June 2022 (UTC)
 * Heyyyy, I will continue with the rest tomorrow. Thank you for this review. Iaof2017 (talk) 20:29, 11 June 2022 (UTC)
 * Thank you for starting on this, I look forward to seeing the rest of your response later on or tomorrow if I'm working when you go over the remainder! --K. Peake 08:41, 12 June 2022 (UTC)
 * thank you again, I responded to the remaining comments above. Iaof2017 (talk) 11:29, 12 June 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, fabulous work on this! --K. Peake 10:38, 13 June 2022 (UTC)