Talk:Kathryn Scola

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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Ewilsed. Peer reviewers: AmeliaDM.

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Peer Review
Overall your article is strong, I like your inclusion of the more controversial side of her career and the context of the production code. Here are a few notes. You could combine the first two sentences so that the introduction flows better. You don't need to say that she was a screenwriter again in the third sentence. Instead you can say: “Scola worked in Hollywood for a multitude...”. In the CAREER section you should include something about how she started her career. In the sentence “...first attempted by Anita Loos...” do you mean she first wrote it? Be clearer. Your last paragraph could flow better. Right now you are just listing every film she wrote. Maybe you could just mention the most notable or controversial ones. It would be good to see some information on her personal life as well as what she did after her career. I think these details would make your article more informative and engaging. --AmeliaDM (talk) 18:11, 12 March 2016 (UTC)