Talk:Katia Bellillo/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 21:00, 8 October 2021 (UTC)

Comments That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 09:51, 11 October 2021 (UTC)
 * "former Minister" why capital M?
 * Fixed.
 * "the PRC, she joined the PDCI in the" you ought to explain these initialisms before using them, many people won't know what they are without having to click on them.
 * Added.
 * "she was attacked by" physically? Verbally?  Make it clear.
 * Added.
 * "Replacing Laura Balbo.." and yet she worked with Balbo?
 * Clarified.
 * Is there a link for "XIV European Affairs Commission"?
 * Unfortunately not.
 * "only receiving 1.77% " no need for "only".
 * Removed.
 * "was physically attacked..." there you go. Okay was there any fall-out from this?
 * Expanded.
 * "referendum on assisted fertilisation" any article for this, even at it.wiki?
 * There is. I have added a link.
 * Fabbrini source has a spared at the end.
 * Removed.
 * Non-English language citations could use the  parameter for English titles.
 * Added.
 * Thank you for your thorough review. I have made the amendments and added additional references for the new data. Please tell me if there is anything else you would like done. simongraham (talk) 16:53, 13 October 2021 (UTC)