Talk:Katy Abbott

Edit request
1. Under Biography, the article mentions 5 solo albums released by Abbott. Please update the album listed Famous to "Famous (ABC Classics)" by removing "(Leeward Side Records)". This is a currently an inaccurate listing of this album as per the subject's website (http://www.katyabbott.com/australian-composer-katy-abbott/#bio).

2. Also under Biography, please add, at the end, a statement to this effect: "She also mentors established artists and arts leaders across the creative discplines through focused career-growth programs." This is an established fact as per the article from The Australian Music Centre (https://www.australianmusiccentre.com.au/artist/abbott-katy) as well as the subject's website and is worth noting in what I hope is neutral language in this way.

3. Under Selected Works - Orchestral please remove the 2020 "Forces" listing. It was created in error and should instead read "2020 Fast Ride In A Suave Machine (versions for orchestra - arr. Stanke and Wind Symphony - arr. Nicholas Williams."

4. Under awards, this external link could be added to the words Paul Lowin Song Cycle Prize to verify the existence of the prize and add additional detail for Wikipedia users. (https://www.australianmusiccentre.com.au/about/paullowinprizes)

Thanks in anticipation and appreciation! KGeorgina (talk) 06:19, 28 February 2023 (UTC)
 * Yellow check.svg Partly done: I performed 1 and 3; 2 contains wordings that would be too promotional for a Wikipedia article ("arts leaders", "creative disciplines", "focused career-growth programs"); 4 would effectively add an external link to a non external links section, which is why I'm not making that edit. Best regards, -- Johannes (Talk) (Contribs) (Articles) 19:45, 12 May 2023 (UTC)
 * Thanks. I appreciate the follow up and feedback. ~KGeorgina 2001:8004:1160:495B:985D:8E4A:B126:B875 (talk) 02:59, 15 May 2023 (UTC)