Talk:Kauffman Center for the Performing Arts

Copyediting
As I tagged the article with advert and copyedit I'm responding to a request for more detailed suggestions. The opening paragraph focuses on the size and cost of the venue, which if they are not extraordinary are of temporary interest only. The size might fit with either the facilities section or the architecture section; the cost might fit with the history, or perhaps a new background/origin section explaining why it was built. The facilities section is OK, the resident companies is OK, except for "troops/troupes" homonym. (This is the only real copyediting issue I see on review now.) The architecture section sounds suspiciously like a cut-and-paste from a brochure or project proposal and that should be checked out; if it comes from a reliable source (such as an architecture critic) it should be cited. The list of firms is directory-like and promotional. The organization section is a collection of vanity redlinks (are any of these people WP:BIO-level notable, or just local luminaries?), and suggests that the facility is named for someone associated with the board, but doesn't explain why (back to origin section). Finally, there are no cited sources providing independent verification of the importance of the subject. I think I will change copyedit to primary sources to make clearer what is missing. --Dhartung | Talk 04:35, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
 * Done and done.65.28.9.8 02:59, 16 September 2007 (UTC)

External links modified
Hello fellow Wikipedians,

I have just modified 2 external links on Kauffman Center for the Performing Arts. Please take a moment to review my edit. If you have any questions, or need the bot to ignore the links, or the page altogether, please visit this simple FaQ for additional information. I made the following changes:
 * Added archive https://web.archive.org/web/20120527180828/http://www.kauffmancenter.org/about-the-center/the-building/ to http://www.kauffmancenter.org/about-the-center/the-building/
 * Added archive https://web.archive.org/web/20120516012109/http://www.grammymuseum.org/interior.php?section=education&page=musicrevolution to http://www.grammymuseum.org/interior.php?section=education&page=musicrevolution

When you have finished reviewing my changes, you may follow the instructions on the template below to fix any issues with the URLs.

Cheers.— InternetArchiveBot  (Report bug) 09:35, 3 May 2017 (UTC)