Talk:Kavita Ramdas

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Overly detailed
The article provides too much information of little import and reads as a self-promotion piece. It needs to cite major accomplishments that impact a broader audience. For example, where she went to high school and the fact she received a scholarship to Mt Holyoke College are both inconsequential and unnecessary. The article received some minor updates over time, in sections, but other sections were not updated. This makes it confusing and frustrating to read. Jbrockettm (talk) 03:11, 9 July 2021 (UTC)