Talk:Kay Armatage

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 5 September 2019 and 4 December 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Gossipgirl123456. Peer reviewers: RedMatcha, Privacy1548.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 23:37, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Peer review
A well-written, well-structured draft overall.

Maybe a few minor revisions are needed:

- IMDb seems not like a proper preference to use.

- It will be better if you add an education section. For example, more details about the her B.A. English Literature (Queen’s University) M.A. and Ph.D. (English, University of Toronto).

- Some sentences could be more neutral. For example, "Though she is no longer a programmer with TIFF, Armatage is now on..."

RedMatcha (talk) 02:55, 5 November 2019 (UTC)