Talk:Keanolani/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 00:50, 23 July 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges  Consermonor   Opus meum  00:50, 23 July 2018 (UTC)

Criteria
GA Criteria:
 * 1
 * 1.a   ✅
 * 1.b   ✅
 * 2
 * 2.a   ✅
 * 2.b   ✅
 * 2.c   ✅
 * 2.d   ✅
 * 3
 * 3.a   ✅
 * 3.b   ✅
 * 4
 * 4.a   ✅
 * 5
 * 5.a   ✅
 * 6
 * 6.a   ✅
 * 6.b   ✅
 * No DAB links   ✅
 * No dead links   ✅
 * No missing citations   ✅

Prose Suggestions
Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.
 * You may want to expand the lead, possibly including facts about her illegitimacy, or her death.
 * Her father's husband Keaupuni was not biological father as was later attested by Mele, a witness in the divorce suit between him and Maheha in 1855. I think this is garbled, I believe it should be:
 * Her husband Keaupuni was not the biological father of the baby as was later attested by Mele, a witness in the divorce suit between him and Maheha in 1855.


 * That's all my suggestions, passing now. Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  11:28, 23 July 2018 (UTC)
 * Changed prose as suggested. KAVEBEAR (talk) 16:26, 23 July 2018 (UTC)