Talk:Keeps Gettin' Better/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wikipedian Penguin (talk · contribs) 22:14, 19 February 2012 (UTC)

The song is catchy as hell. I'll probably make small changes as I go, or maybe not as this is a shorter article. — WP: PENGUIN  · [ TALK ]  22:14, 19 February 2012 (UTC)

Spotcheck and sources
 * One DAB link--Minority Report--should be fixed.
 * "Growing into being a woman, a mother, it's a very different time in my life, and also where I'm at musically" - comma after "mother" should actually be a dash.
 * "with a "throbbing" synth line." - quotation marks should actually surround "throbbing synth line", not just "throbbing".
 * "Aguilera sings,[3] "Some days I'm a super bitch".[9]" - the "[3]" should be moved to immediately after the preceding sentence, I'm guessing. Not sure why "Aguilera sings" has to be cited.
 * Background, Composition and Critical reception are a bit dense on quotations. A lot of the quotations can be easily paraphrased. Let me know if you'd like help. I'll be happy to pitch in.
 * The About.com does offer a bit more criticism on the lyrics, such as comparisons with Katy Perry. You might want to discuss that.
 * There's nothing in the Slant source about the outdated dance theme. He did call it "disco-slut".
 * "Gavin Martin from The Mirror gave a mixed response as he said "Nothing dates as quickly as pop that dares to call itself futuristic"." - needs inline citation.
 * FN 13 returns 404 error.
 * FN 16 isn't MTV. It's Popjustice.
 * Please address issues before I can move on. Thank you.

Final:
 * I take it that the nominator is very busy at the moment and is unable to take time to focus on this review. If so, I completely understand and will close it. Feel free to nominate once the concerns above have been dealt with. If you have questions or require help, I'm available! I hope for the best, — WP: PENGUIN  · [ TALK ]  19:01, 16 March 2012 (UTC)