Talk:Keith Hartwig/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 19:15, 15 September 2023 (UTC)

I'll review this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk)  @ 19:15, 15 September 2023 (UTC)

Comments
Looks good, putting on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk)  @ 16:42, 16 September 2023 (UTC)
 * I copyedited the article here.
 * I archived the reference links.
 * The lead says one season in the NFL, yet it says in the infobox that he was with the Packers in 1978. Maybe clarify.
 * he recorded no statistics is probably not necessary. Instead, maybe say something like "he recorded no tackles on special teams and no receptions on offense".
 * Ref spot checks: #4, 8, 11, 14, 20, 23, 25
 * I re-worded the lead to fix your first issue; as for the second, tackles weren't recorded in 1977, so I don't think it'd be appropriate to change to your wording as he could have gotten a tackle, it just wasn't recorded. Any suggestions? BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:06, 21 September 2023 (UTC)
 * It is fine as is. Nice work, passing! « Gonzo fan2007  (talk)  @ 15:06, 21 September 2023 (UTC)