Talk:Kelly Kelly/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 05:04, 17 March 2011 (UTC)

I will review this article shortly. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 05:04, 17 March 2011 (UTC)

Here are the issues I found:
 * "She made her debut on the first episode of the weekly television program, June 13, 2006," modify a bit, perhaps 'of the weekly television program on June..'
 * Done. Nici  Vampire  Heart  12:29, 19 March 2011 (UTC)
 * "On the October 29 episode of Raw, Kelly won a battle royal, to earn a match" comma after royal not needed
 * Done. Nici  Vampire  Heart  12:29, 19 March 2011 (UTC)
 * "She made her debut on the April 30 episode of SmackDown," comma not needed
 * Done. Nici  Vampire  Heart  12:29, 19 March 2011 (UTC)
 * "She went on to feud with Lay-Cool, gaining and ally in Tiffany." an ally
 * Done. Nici  Vampire  Heart  12:29, 19 March 2011 (UTC)
 * The WWE external link is a 404, looks like they again modified all their roster links on the site.
 * Fixed url. Nici  Vampire  Heart  12:29, 19 March 2011 (UTC)

I'll put the article on hold and will pass it once those issues are fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 04:16, 19 March 2011 (UTC)
 * All completed. Thanks for the review. Nici  Vampire  Heart  12:29, 19 March 2011 (UTC)
 * No problem. Everything looks good now, so article passes as a GA. Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 16:32, 19 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Great. Thanks so much. Nici  Vampire  Heart  20:26, 19 March 2011 (UTC)