Talk:Kelsi Singer

Draft Feedback
Hi

This draft looks good! Thanks for your hard work. I made some tiny formatting tweaks to your sandbox, fyi. I only have a few, small additional suggestions:
 * In the education section, I would combine the first two sentences. Specifically, I would remove the word "discover" which readers may read as "she started the field of astrobiology." To readers who don't know anything about astrobiology, the clarity will go a long way!
 * I would also recommend merging the Media and Outreach section into the Research section. I think that works better with the flow has a slightly less promotional tone

Everything else looks well-formatted, linked, and ready to go. Once you've made these changes, feel free to move it live! Great work! Will (Wiki Ed) (talk) 22:32, 20 November 2020 (UTC)