Talk:Kenneth Law

“Alleged”
Shouldn’t the lead use “allegedly”? Zanahary (talk) 06:05, 4 June 2024 (UTC)

April 2022 suicide(s)
The first paragraph of Kenneth Law currently reads:

"After a British woman committed suicide with sodium nitrite in April 2022, the coroner investigating her death noted the involvement of a Mississauga post office and Imtime Cuisine, an allegedly Law-operated business. The coroner had called for the British government to look into the matter and take action."

The two sentences are cited to two different sources, and it is by no means obvious that they both refer to the same case: the first source mentions the suicide of a woman in Surrey; the second a 23-year-old British student. Other than the fact that both occurred in April 2022, what reason is there to think that they are the same case? Given that Law is according to our article suspected of involvement in 88 suicides in Britain between starting to sell sodium nitrite in late 2020 and being charged in August 2023 (averaging more than two per month) we shouldn't assume that because two articles describe deaths from the same month they are referring to the same death. Caeciliusinhorto-public (talk) 09:39, 5 June 2024 (UTC)

Feedback from New Page Review process
I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Notability through sustained media coverage related to assisted suicide. There will no doubt be further coverage as cases develop or are resolved.

Klbrain (talk) 08:01, 8 June 2024 (UTC)