Talk:Kenneth Stewart (RNZAF officer)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 17:36, 24 January 2023 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:36, 24 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Images appropriately licensed
 * Is his service number actually useful for a reader?
 * I've been pinged by other reviewers for not having it. I could remove it from the article body and just cite it in the infobox but I prefer to discuss everything mentioned in the infobox in the text. Zawed (talk) 10:34, 27 January 2023 (UTC)


 * link radar
 * Done, both in lead and main body. Zawed (talk) 10:34, 27 January 2023 (UTC)


 * In the early life section I think that we can dispense with his middle name.
 * Done. Zawed (talk) 10:34, 27 January 2023 (UTC)


 * Shouldn't Wigram air base be RNZAF Wigram
 * Rephrase. Zawed (talk) 10:34, 27 January 2023 (UTC)


 * RAF aircraft mark numbers don't use a full stop
 * Removed. Zawed (talk) 10:34, 27 January 2023 (UTC)


 * Shortly after the move, on 7 April, Stewart and Brumby achieved more success; ground radar alerted them to a German aircraft in their patrol sector over the Ruhr awkward
 * I have rephrased this. Zawed (talk) 10:34, 27 January 2023 (UTC)


 * Short and sweet--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:23, 27 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Thanks, this is ready for you to have another look. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 10:34, 27 January 2023 (UTC)