Talk:Kenya at the 2002 Winter Olympics/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 06:46, 2 August 2018 (UTC)

Will look at this article. MWright96 (talk) 06:46, 2 August 2018 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Background

 * "They have competed at most Summer Olympic Games since then" - get rid of then
 * "consisted of one cross-country skier, Philip Boit. Boit had also" - try not to have the sentences start and end like this
 * "As the only participant for Kenya, he was selected as" - try As his country's only participant, Boit was selected as

Cross-country skiing

 * "scouted by American sportswear company Nike, Inc.," - think having just Nike will suffice here
 * "This ranked him 77th for the event, and only the top 60 were allowed to proceed to the second 10 kilometre freestyle portion of the event" - reptition of event
 * "Only the top 16 finishers were advanced to the quarterfinals" - remove were

Referneces

 * Reference 7 is misssing Associated Press as the agency that provided the story to The Seattle Times

That all I have. Will put this review on hold for the time being. MWright96 (talk) 07:23, 2 August 2018 (UTC)
 * Everything addressed, thanks for the review! Courcelles (talk) 07:36, 2 August 2018 (UTC)
 * Nice quick response. Can now gladly promote this to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 07:44, 2 August 2018 (UTC)