Talk:Kenzie Ruston Hemric/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 09:09, 14 November 2017 (UTC)

Interesting to see a woman driver at GAN. Will review. MWright96 (talk) 09:09, 14 November 2017 (UTC)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * "She later competed as a NASCAR Drive for Diversity member in NASCAR's K&N Pro Series East" - remove the second mention of NASCAR since it has already been established the K&N Pro Series East is sanctioned by the stock car racing body

Early career

 * "When she turned 17," - Upon turning 17
 * Either add the acronyms of Texas Motor Speedway in parentheses the first time it is mentioned or spell out the track each subsequent time it is mentioned.

Stock car racing

 * "In 2011, Ruston began competing in stock cars, which included four ARCA Racing Series races with Venturini Motorsports, making her debut at Toledo Speedway in the No. 25 Toyota, and finished 10th." - I think separating this long sentence will help.
 * "She switched to No. 55 for three additional races, finishing 10th, 12th, and 26th in those races." - reptition of races

NASCAR

 * "and finished 6th in the points standings." - spell out 6th
 * "During the year, she became the highest-finishing female driver in series history, finishing second at Iowa Speedway." - repetition of finishing
 * Also for BKR, same query with TMS