Talk:Kepler-10c/GA1


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GA Review
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Reviewer: Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 15:58, 21 August 2011 (UTC)

Here are the issues I found with this article:
 * "In January 2011, some four months prior" prior to the discovery? It's mentioned in the lead but starting off with that's still a bit odd, I'd just remove the 4 months part.
 * It still felt awkward after removing the 4 months portion, so I nixed the whole phrase. How does it look? --Starstriker7(Talk) 00:20, 22 August 2011 (UTC)
 * "allowed the Kepler team to rule out the majority alternatives" majority of the alternatives
 * ✅ --Starstriker7(Talk) 00:20, 22 August 2011 (UTC)
 * link triple star system.
 * ✅ --Starstriker7(Talk) 00:20, 22 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Per MoS, don't have Ref #4's title in all-caps.
 * All set. --Starstriker7(Talk) 00:20, 22 August 2011 (UTC)

I'll put the article on hold and pass when the issues are fixed. Should only take like 5 minutes to modify so nothing big. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 15:58, 21 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Everything looks good now, so I'll pass the article as a GA. Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 01:55, 22 August 2011 (UTC)


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