Talk:Keri (fedayi)

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Dear Sir or Madame,

I recently visited the page http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Arshak_Gafavian and at the bottom was prompted with a "Did you find what you were looking for?" (or the like), and when I clicked no, I was prompted with "Any suggestions for improvement?" When I tried submitting my suggestions, it said that the page was not enabled for feedback. I contacted Wikipedia, and they said this was due to a bug that they are working on. Thus, in an effort to improve the content of wikipedia in the interim, I wanted to post what I had written in the suggestions box in case any of you could help:

1. There is a discrepancy in his last name in the title of the article and teh body of the article; was it Galfaian or was it Gafavian (I'm guessing it's the former, which is a fairly common last name, and not the latter, which I've never heard of, but not certain).

2. The text is poorly written compared to most other wikipedia pages I've visit; there are grammatical errors, fragments, etc.

3. Information on how he died (e.g. accidental, in warfare, etc.), who wounded him in the chest, and where (geographically) would be very helpful?

Thanks so much for your time and consideration, James (forwarded from OTRS by L Faraone  20:18, 10 June 2013 (UTC))