Talk:Kerstin Avemo

Improvements needed

 * Copy-editing. Opera titles should be italicised and follow the Opera Project capitalisation guidance here. Article needs to be trimmed of unreferenced, résumé-like material, e.g. last paragraph. Simply listing works and concert venues she has allegedly sung with no references and no cennection betrween work and venue, adds nothing to the article.
 * Reference style is confusing and unclear. All references should be references not divided into "notes" and "references". Note also that newspaper references need author, date of publication, original language article title, link on the publication (if it has a Wikipedia article) and publication name needs to be italicised.
 * References need improvement. There are still some unsourced statements regarding performances (or poorly referenced ones. IMDB should not be used as a reference and there is far too great a reliance on official biographies. Please add reviews, etc. from reliable independent sources. Here's one, with can be used for the Teatro Real performance:
 * http://www.abc.net.au/classic/content/2013/08/18/3823002.htm
 * That page also has a link to a New York Times review. Please access the review and add it to the article. I'm not going to do it myself because I don't want to use up my monthly free-access limit to that paper.
 * Voceditenore (talk) 09:04, 16 January 2014 (UTC)
 * Now clearer referencing style as well as more references :-) Still needs further improvement though ... Andersneld (talk) 12:48, 16 January 2014 (UTC)