Talk:Keterkaitan Keterikatan/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Figureskatingfan (talk · contribs) 20:41, 6 June 2022 (UTC)

Hi, I will be reviewing this article for the June Backlog Drive.


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * The prose is adequate for GA. One picky point: you overuse the word "Noah". Please replace it with "they" or "them" or "the band" when appropriate.
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * All of the references are in Indonesian, which I unfortunately don't know, so I'm AGF that they work and that they support your claims.
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * Again, I'm AGF; the article seems to hit everything album articles need to hit.
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * No evidence of edit warring.
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * Only two images, one in the infobox and the other of the pinsi boat; both are tagged correctly. They're fine, but how about including images of the band and/or band members?
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Nice work; once you fix the small grammar issue, I'll promote to GA.
 * Nice work; once you fix the small grammar issue, I'll promote to GA.

I've fixed the grammar issue. About the image, I think I can crop an image of Uki from File:Peterpan2008.jpg, but it might take a while since I'm currently a little busy in the real world.  Daud (talk) 13:00, 14 June 2022 (UTC)


 * thanks for your quick response. No worries about the image; add it when you're able. I will go and promote to GA now. Congrats, keep up the good work. Best, Christine (Figureskatingfan) (talk) 17:05, 14 June 2022 (UTC)