Talk:Kev Gray & The Gravy Train

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Tone problems
I've tagged this article for WP:NPOV because it has significant tone problems. The peacockery and superlative writing style is overhwleming, and inappropriate for an encyclopedia article. -- Mikeblas (talk) 15:50, 24 June 2020 (UTC)

Revisions about Tone
I had a third-party help with the above opinion on tone. They said there were maybe too many positive adjectives so I removed the ones that they said stood out as maybe unnecessary, and some positive comments. Maybe as I got from band websites and news articles that this style does not always fit when copied Wikipeda. Also, I did not write all of this. Overall, there are some negative points about this band too, so I think balance is OK. I did not update this site for 3 years or more so I will revise again and update some old information when I get time to go through their posts and news and so on. I will take down the Neutrality notice as it is a little embarassing. I hope it is OK now. Thank you for your help.