Talk:Kevin Grady/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: –Grondemar 18:14, 8 August 2010 (UTC)

I will aim to post a complete review within the next couple of days. –Grondemar 18:14, 8 August 2010 (UTC)
 * One early comment based on my first read-through: what ended up happening to him for the upcoming season? Did he eventually make it to an NFL training camp; did he sign with a UFL team; is he out of football entirely? I did a Google search but wasn't able to find anything. –Grondemar 18:24, 8 August 2010 (UTC)
 * I think his career is over. At least I have been unable to document any signing. I think he retains permanent notability despite never playing professionally.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 00:32, 11 August 2010 (UTC)

I completed my review and have the following concerns, in addition to the one above:


 * Under High school career, why is All-State in italics?
 * Probably an artifact from a prior editor.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 00:34, 11 August 2010 (UTC)
 * It would be nice to add a little more about his recruiting. Did he consider any other schools before selecting Michigan?
 * According to current refs 4 & 5 he had no interest in other schools.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 00:53, 11 August 2010 (UTC)
 * I added a sentence to that effect with the references you mentioned. –Grondemar 03:40, 11 August 2010 (UTC)
 * I added a sentence to the Junior year (2007) section: "He would miss the entire 2007 season recovering from his injuries; by making use of a redshirt year, however, he was able to not use up a year of eligibility." I'm pretty sure this is accurate and fills a gap in the narrative; could you find a source for this however?
 * The next section starts with a ref for the fact that he was still recovering during the following Spring. I just moved that one to your cn tag.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 00:46, 11 August 2010 (UTC)
 * Do you have statistics for Kevin Grady's senior season?
 * Added stats to prose.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 00:42, 11 August 2010 (UTC)
 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * The article will be on hold for a minimum of seven days to allow the above concerns to be addressed.
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * The article will be on hold for a minimum of seven days to allow the above concerns to be addressed.
 * The article will be on hold for a minimum of seven days to allow the above concerns to be addressed.

Thank you. –Grondemar 16:50, 9 August 2010 (UTC)


 * With all above concerns addressed, I am passing this Good Article Nomination.  Congratulations! –Grondemar 03:40, 11 August 2010 (UTC)