Talk:Kevin Lokko/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 18:37, 5 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 20:41, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Merge first two paras.
 * Then instead of "Lokko began his... " -> "He began...
 * National League is overlinked.
 * "Cup winning" -> "Cup-winning". In both places.
 * "became captain at " link for captain?
 * "Eaton College" where?
 * "After being released by Norwich" reptitive.
 * "header" link.
 * "what would serve as " what was.
 * "injury-time" link.
 * "the National League on a season" overlinked.
 * "Man of the Match" link.
 * "with Stevenage chairman" their chairman.
 * Link substitute on the first instance (back in the Early career section).
 * Do we have a link for "loan"?
 * "clean sheets" link.
 * "the COVID-19 pandemic" go for the "in the United Kingdom" article here.
 * Link manager on its first instance.
 * "non-League" link.
 * "Described as" by whom?


 * Thanks for reviewing the article I have made all of the above changes as you've suggested. Cheers. SBFCEdit (talk) 22:34, 5 September 2021 (UTC)