Talk:Kew Asylum/GA1

GA Review
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The article in my opinion generally satisfies GA criteria. There are only two problems:


 * 1) The lead is too short. Please, expand it. The lead should be 3-4 paragraphs long according to WP:LEAD.
 * 2) I added two cn tags. Please, replace them with citations.

I will put the article on hold. If in the next seven days the issues mentioned above are fixed, I will list the article. Ruslik (talk) 13:29, 6 November 2008 (UTC)


 * [[Image:Asylum_019.JPG|thumb|right|]]Thank you. One of the cns has already been attended to.  For the second, I can't find an actual reference other than the actual plate which is on the front of Willsmere.  Unless some one can suggest a way to reference the plate (or another reference can be found), the sentence will have to be removed, I guess
 * I will work on the lead section over the next week. Many thanks for reviewing the article Shelbypark (talk) 09:54, 7 November 2008 (UTC)
 * The plate is a reliable source, in my opinion. Ruslik (talk) 10:24, 7 November 2008 (UTC)


 * The lead section is now longer and more comprehensive. I've removed the  from the second cn as I can't work out how to actually reference a picture on commons.  I hope this is okay. Shelbypark (talk) 09:08, 13 November 2008 (UTC)

Well, I am satisfied with how you addressed my concerns, so I will pass the article. Ruslik (talk) 09:20, 13 November 2008 (UTC)