Talk:Kfarsghab

GA Review
Unfortunately, this article does not meet the GA criteria at this time. Much of the article is unreferenced. In addition, I read through and found that much of it is not encyclopedic in tone. It seems as though much of the article has been copied and pasted from another site, although this might not be the case. Statements like "We suppose that" and "But who is Ibn Al Sabha?" or trailing of with "..." at the end of a sentence are not proper writing for an encyclopedia. I have tagged the article with a "tone" tag and recommend copyediting (in some areas, rewriting), referencing, and placing it for peer review before renominating. Best wishes, GaryColemanFan (talk) 13:20, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
 * What is good in the Wikipedia concept is that it is written by real people for real people, and not by scholars for scholars. Keep up the good work, Fan. youcroft (talk) 20:32, 15 April 2008 (UTC)