Talk:Khadija al-Salami

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Peer review: You have described Khadija al-Salami’s early life and career with clear details. I could understand that she had an extremely difficult youth with your detailed explanation. I liked that you cited a lot, so I could know source of information easily. For better ease of reading it would be good if the text was separated into paragraphs rather than one single text. Other than that, I could not come up with any other suggestions, because the information in your article was presented very clearly and neatly. Crazy rich asian (talk) 07:41, 31 October 2018 (UTC)

Peer review (Nerissa35): I liked the amount of information and sources you provided. I thought some of the sentences could be shortened for reading ease. I would keep an eye out for redundancies in the text - for example, you mentioned the film I am Nujood, Age 10 and Divorced to be her first feature film three times. In some areas, you could clarify subject-verb agreements. I fixed some headings to match the Wikipedia style guide. I like the awards table you have, and will look at adding that into my own article.Nerissa35 (talk) 18:42, 1 November 2018 (UTC)