Talk:Khaki Campbell

Sentence in need of punctuation and other work?
The meaning of: "This breed of duck is listed as watch by the ... " is not at all immediately obvious. Perhaps it could be made clearer by modifications along the lines of: "The conservation status of this breed of duck is listed as watch by the ... "

Old_Wombat (talk) 09:26, 26 July 2011 (UTC)

Missing Descriptor
In "The Khaki Campbell Duck was formed and in 1923, Mrs. Campbell's husband, Dr. Arthur Campbell was elected president" it seems it should be "Khaki Campbell Duck" club or group or something. I don't have access to the original source. JDE 188.164.224.203 (talk) 10:55, 26 March 2016 (UTC)