Talk:Khori Dastoor

Copy edits
Despite the numerous references, the text is largely taken from http://www.khoridastoor.com/Khori_Dastoor/Biography.html and as such lacks encyclopedic style and tone. I have copyedited per Manual of Style:
 * No use of "Ms." or "Miss" Dastoor - simply "she" or "Dastoor"
 * No use of "currently" - give the date
 * "Pasadena CA" → "Pasadena, California". WP articles are meant for an international readership.

The quotes about her voice quality are directly taken from her website and do not appear in the source given,

The infobox is not normally used for classical and opera singers as its primarily meant for pop musicians. I would personally remove it, but given that it's there, it doesn't need to state that her instrument is "voice". This is obvious from the fact that she's an opera singer. Voceditenore (talk) 07:03, 10 May 2010 (UTC)

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 * Dastoor new-200x300.jpg