Talk:Khraniteli/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 15:50, 11 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Thanks for taking this on. Chiswick Chap (talk) 16:05, 11 June 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 15:50, 11 June 2021 (UTC)

Basic stuff and comments

 * Add alt text to both images.
 * Done.


 * Lead and #Context look good.
 * Thanks.


 * Plot is 444 words so that passes WP:FILMPLOT.
 * Noted.


 * "entertains them at table" - word missing?
 * None that I can see. Maybe this is a British English thing.
 * Shouldn't it be "at a table"? Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 03:52, 13 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Fixed.


 * Remove the comma after "in the snow to Bree".
 * Done.


 * Remove the comma after "bridge across a chasm".
 * Done.


 * Change "realise" to "realize" - AE and consistency.
 * Done.


 * What is the purpose of the #Crew section. Is this not covered in the infobox?
 * Well, the infobox summarizes the key points of the article, several of which are in this section; the section covers also production design and costume design, not in the infobox.
 * Well, then I would suggest adding sources for the rest of the crew. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 03:52, 13 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Added.


 * Archive sources for future use (you can use this tool or do it manually).
 * Done.