Talk:Kicks (song)/GA1

GA Review
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 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * "...wrote the song for The Animals, but lead singer Eric Burdon turned it down." Think it would be better if you were to put "the band's lead singer" here.
 * "The result was "Kicks," a song originally offered to the Animals, but Eric Burdon turned it down." Consider rewording to "a song originally offered to the Animals, but turned down by lead singer Eric Burdon".
 * "Within two months of its release, the single sold 500,000 copies." Should probably say "had sold"
 * "causing a perception by members of the burgeoning youth counterculture" Don't like "causing a perception" here.
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * There don't appear to be cites for some of the cover versions in the "Other versions" section.
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * A tracklisting for the live single might be nice.
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Very good article, shouldn't be too much work to get up to standard. Cavie78 (talk) 22:52, 14 October 2009 (UTC)
 * All issues addressed, I believe. Regarding the 1982 live single tracklisting, I learned of the single's apparent existence by viewing the Singles Discography at Paul Revere's official site, but as I can find no other verifiable sources, I removed both references to the single.  Gong show   ⊕ 04:15, 15 October 2009 (UTC)
 * I've passed the article, good work! Cavie78 (talk) 00:05, 16 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Great! Thanks for the kind words, for taking the time to review the article, and for the suggestions.  Gong show   ⊕ 01:40, 16 October 2009 (UTC)
 * All issues addressed, I believe. Regarding the 1982 live single tracklisting, I learned of the single's apparent existence by viewing the Singles Discography at Paul Revere's official site, but as I can find no other verifiable sources, I removed both references to the single.  Gong show   ⊕ 04:15, 15 October 2009 (UTC)
 * I've passed the article, good work! Cavie78 (talk) 00:05, 16 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Great! Thanks for the kind words, for taking the time to review the article, and for the suggestions.  Gong show   ⊕ 01:40, 16 October 2009 (UTC)