Talk:Kilburn tube station/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Pkbwcgs (talk · contribs) 19:50, 2 February 2019 (UTC)

I am going to pick up the review of this tube station. It looks good and I will give a detailed review later. Pkbwcgs (talk) 19:50, 2 February 2019 (UTC)
 * Thanks for taking the time to review ! Though I will be busy these few weeks I’ll try to respond as quickly as I can :) Vincent LUFan (talk) (Kenton!) 00:11, 3 February 2019 (UTC)
 * Your welcome. I like doing GAs on UK railways and the London Underground. I have my review table ready below. Pkbwcgs (talk) 10:08, 3 February 2019 (UTC)


 * any updates? Vincent LUFan (talk) (Kenton!) 17:58, 10 February 2019 (UTC)
 * Hi. I am not very well but I will pick up the review soon when I am better. Pkbwcgs (talk) 16:16, 11 February 2019 (UTC)
 * Hey man! do get well soon! Your health is more important than this. Everyone’s getting sick recently since it’s the festives so please take care  Vincent LUFan (talk) (Kenton!) 16:26, 11 February 2019 (UTC)
 * There are no disambiguation links, dead links or unsourced statements which is a good site. However, I am slightly disappointed that the second paragraph in the article is underlinked. In fact, it has no links. I would suggest that you put some links for the second paragraph to make navigation easier. Pkbwcgs (talk) 18:02, 16 February 2019 (UTC)
 * Ok, done Vincent LUFan (talk) (Kenton!) 08:00, 17 February 2019 (UTC)
 * I added one more important link to London Passenger Transport Board in the second paragraph. Pkbwcgs (talk) 09:18, 17 February 2019 (UTC)
 * Are you expecting a reply for this? But anyway it has been more than a month so I was wondering if there are any updates you wanna give Vincent LUFan (talk) (Kenton!) 04:12, 3 March 2019 (UTC)
 * Sorry, I have been quite busy. However, I have put on the first two passes. Pkbwcgs (talk) 11:33, 3 March 2019 (UTC)


 * I would suggest changing the list below the Services sub-section into proper prose per WP:USEPROSE. THE NEW  Immortal  Wizard  (chat) 22:06, 17 March 2019 (UTC)
 * I beg to differ. It would look super weird writing in that way. Plus is not that long of a list anyway  Vincent LUFan (talk) (Kenton!) 00:47, 18 March 2019 (UTC)
 * Fair enough. THE NEW  Immortal  Wizard  (chat) 01:08, 18 March 2019 (UTC)


 * Thanks for your continued patience. I would suggest that you convert the landmarks in the last sentence of the "location" section to blue links so that readers can click onto those links to find out more about the area near Kilburn Tube Station. Pkbwcgs (talk) 16:50, 18 March 2019 (UTC)
 * Hello! Sorry for the late reply, been busy lately. I have added the wikilinks. I'm intrigued by your interests in wikilinks since I was expecting a bit of tweaks needed for the contents instead but seems like it is all good to you :) Vincent LUFan (talk) (Kenton!) 07:49, 3 April 2019 (UTC)
 * I am going to pass this. Thanks for your work and your patience. Pkbwcgs (talk) 19:20, 5 April 2019 (UTC)