Talk:Kill the Alligator and Run/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 03:25, 11 August 2012 (UTC)


 * Lede: Link animated
 * Done. Theleftorium (talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Lede: Link sitcom
 * Done. Theleftorium (talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Lede: Add "television" between animated and sitcom
 * Done. Theleftorium (talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Lede: Only Fox should be linked, not network
 * Done. Theleftorium (talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Lede: To calm him down, the Simpson family → To calm him down, Homer and the rest of the Simpson family
 * Done. Theleftorium (talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Plot: I don't think "insane" is a word for Wikipedia. Lol. Perhaps change it.
 * Yeah it is, Insanity. Theleftorium (talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Plot: The Simpsons → Simpson family
 * "The Simpsons" is better here because I use "they" later in the sentence, and it sounds better than "it". Theleftorium (talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Production: 1999–2000 should be 1999–00, as per WP:YEAR
 * I'd prefer not, since "2000" starts with "20" and not "19". Theleftorium (talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Production: Link 1999–2000 to the US TV schedule here.
 * Done. Theleftorium (talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Production: "The Simpsons producer Ian Maxtone-Graham directed Bader". Show the producer directed him? Haha; lol.
 * I don't understand what you mean... Theleftorium (talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Production: #1 should be No. 1, as per WP:POUND
 * Done. Theleftorium (talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Production: I'd consider paraphrasing. Too many quotes in production
 * I disagree, there's hardly any quotes at all. Theleftorium (talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Release: Only Fox should be linked, not network
 * Done. Theleftorium (talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Release: on the box set → in the box set
 * Done. Theleftorium (talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
 * References: Ref. 14 — About.com is not a good source. Thus, it should be removed.
 * In some cases About.com is not a good source, in this case it is as the article was written by Nancy Basile. Theleftorium (talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
 * External links: TV.com link?
 * Done. Theleftorium (talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
 * External links: Categories below should be sorted in alphabetical order please.
 * Done. Theleftorium (talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)

Overall; a great article. In good shape, I will be happy to pass as soon as the above concerns are fixed. Thanks, TBrandley 15:51, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review! :) Theleftorium (talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Okay; looks good. I'll pass the article for GA. TBrandley 16:41, 19 August 2012 (UTC)