Talk:Kill the Lights (Britney Spears song)/GA1

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Reviewer: Petergriffin9901 (talk • message • contribs • count  • [/wiki/Special:Log?user= logs ] • email) 09:48, 2 September 2011 (UTC)


 * 1 Disemg link ✅
 * 2 Dead links ✅ only one, still searching for the other one... - Sauloviegas (talk) 09:48, 2 September 2011 (UTC)

Lead

 * that talks about the singer's relationship -> that alludes too ✅
 * who considered the song a sequel -> it ✅
 * considered, considered ✅
 * rmv did ✅
 * italicize Billboard ✅
 * and visiting another planet full of lights -> I expect better grammar ✅
 * was featured ✅

Background

 * Link LR ✅
 * confirmed development of the album -> GR (What is this? - Sauloviegas (talk) 09:47, 2 September 2011 (UTC))
 * Grammar. Re-write.-- CallMe Nathan  &bull;  Talk2Me   03:36, 3 September 2011 (UTC)
 * That long sentence should be separated and proper punctuation should be placed ✅
 * He said he was inspired by Hans Zimmer's scores, such as Pirates of the Caribbean soundtracks -> He credited "" as a primary source of inspiration
 * On November 13, 2008, the song leaked a month before the album's official release -> Th song leaked on November 13, 2008, a full month before the album's official release
 * on the forth season
 * How was it featured? (Played, intro song. etc.?)
 * along with "Circus"' Junior Vasquez Club Circus Remix. -> rmv double quote. Also, better "the Junior Vasquez Club Circus Remix of "Circus".

Composition

 * The sample needs a much more in depth descriptive rational (with sources)
 * that talks about -> again
 * was considered as a sequel of it, -> was considered its sequel
 * the fact that Spears is introduced by Danja as "Our very own Pop princess / Now Queen of Pop" -> Why?
 * claiming the singer's vocals are heavily processed in the song -> while describing her vocals as heavily produced

Reception

 * "Kill the Lights" received positive reviews from music critics -> NPOV. There are negative reviews as well
 * Too many "ands" being used as connectors
 * Too many "saids"
 * me","
 * Link TS
 * Link Madonna
 * MoS issues. When in quotes, the album should appear 'Blackout'
 * This section needs a lot of tightening
 * On the dated
 * while its host album Circus -> parent
 * sixty-nine on Pop 100,
 * seventy-two on Pop 100 Airplay

Music video

 * No need to write "Britney.com". -> Official website is enough
 * The winner of the contest would get to see their story becoming a plot for an official music video of a song -> needs significant re-writing
 * for "Kill the Lights" title "Known Everywhere", that was revealed on February 11, 2009, -> Read this out loud. You are missing some things
 * are in the back taking -> background?
 * Right after, wee see an animated Spears -> poor writing; also, your hand appeared to have gone numb while pressing the E key :P
 * he last three lines really need more professional writing

Credits

 * The source should be introduced. Look at The Emancipation of Mimi to understand