Talk:Killing of Greg Gunn/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Atsme (talk · contribs) 15:51, 4 August 2020 (UTC)

GAN Discussion
- I added some suggestions for material that is notable and should be included. When that's done, I'll wrap it up. Atsme Talk 📧 18:18, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
 * , thank you much! I will try to add that in tonight or tomorrow and will ping you when it's done. Regarding point 6 (illustration), I only found a handful of "in memoriam" type pictures of Gunn in the news articles I cited, and I don't think any of them would contribute enough to the article to overcome WP:NFCC8. GeneralNotability (talk) 18:27, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
 * , made those tweaks - good spot on both of those links. GeneralNotability (talk) 21:02, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
 * - sorry, but there's a tiny bit more to add to the lead. I'm pinging you here because I didn't get to sign in the box above. After you add the material, I'll go over it once more in the morning with fresh eyes, and hopefully will close it out. We got through this pretty quickly - you did a good job! Be thinking DYK. SMirC-wink.svg Atsme Talk 📧 23:24, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
 * , thanks, I've expanded the lead a little - didn't quite go with your wording, but think I got the gist. I added a couple more things that came up during my reading, so make sure to take a look at the last paragraph of the "Trial" section as well. As for DYK, I actually snuck a potential hook in this morning as I was working on it, the line about Smith's lawyers calling him "the first and only Montgomery Police Officer ever to be arrested and charged immediately after an officer-involved shooting". Thought that might make for a good DYK. GeneralNotability (talk) 02:04, 5 August 2020 (UTC)