Talk:Killing of Johnny Robinson

Peer Review
The topic is good, but the article needs to be edited. There are a lot of words that need to be capitalized and some awkward wording areas. I also visited the Wikipedia page for the 16th Street Church Bombing and I see that Johnny was mentioned in the article and there is a citation there from the book Free at Last: A History of the Civil Rights Movement and Those Who Died in the Struggle. Maybe you can find it and use it to get more content for your article. You can also plug your article into the 16th Street Church Bombing article so that people who read that one can be directly linked to yours. JANAE2290 (talk) 14:27, 15 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Thank you ., there is work to do, and your final grade in the class probably depends on this article. For starters, it needs to be copyedited to it looks more like encyclopedic writing, which should be flawless in spelling, grammar, mechanics... It's been tagged for long enough now. Dr Aaij (talk) 18:54, 18 April 2017 (UTC)
 * , same as before. Remember, this is the only article you have produced, and there is still so much work to be done--just look at the edit history and the edit summaries in it. Our semester is almost over. Dr Aaij (talk) 01:38, 27 April 2017 (UTC)

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