Talk:Kilpatrick and Beatty text-messaging scandal

cleanup
It seems like this article needs a lot of cleanups, especially the part about the lodging resort with Slowski/y (inconsistency of the spelling of the name, and the tone of the section seems off). This is a really controversial event as well, and I'd like to see some review of the neutrality to see if it is off or not. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Eightbitriot (talk • contribs) 14:43, 18 July 2008 (UTC)