Talk:King David

I made a change in the "David Fighting against Israel" section that originally read:

"[...] he was sent back to Ziklag, which he found to his dismay may had been pillaged and burnt during his brief absence."

to the following:

"[...] he was sent back to Ziklag, which he found to his dismay had been pillaged and burnt during his brief absence."

But I am not sure if the author may have meant something different such as:

"[...] he was sent back to Ziklag, which he found, to his dismay, may have been pillaged and burnt during his brief absence."

In fact, the change I made may need a comma after dismay also.

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